A Tour Gone Wrong

The Willy Wonka tour had been going SO well, but of course there would always be someone who just didn't follow the rules.

Shawna had always been a bit of a rebel, so she had simply scoffed when Wonka had opened the tour with a list of do's and don'ts. After all, this was a goddamn candy factory and she was determined to enjoy herself. So, while the other girls were listening to the candy maker drone on and on about his various products, Shawna was sneaking tastes of whatever she could get her hands on. A lollipop here. A gumdrop there. Where was the harm in that?

Well, she soon got her answer when they arrived at the bakery.

As the ovens blazed away around them, Shawna managed to get her greedy hands on a batch of (what she assumed was) cookie dough. It certainly tasted sweet enough as she licked the substance off her fingers. However, as Wonka continued to excitedly lead the girls through the room, something felt... off.

"Shawna, are you all right?" her friend Lizzy asked her suddenly. "You're looking a little... pale..."

"I'm... I'm fine," Shawna huffed, rubbing at her belly absently. "It's just... really hot in here."

As she scratched at her gurgling stomach, she noticed with alarm that it felt different. Oddly soft. In fact, running a nervous hand along her body, that same softness seemed to be all over. She looked down in puzzlement. Lizzy was right; her whole body DID look pale... almost like...

"D'oh!" Wonka exclaimed, "I almost forgot to tell you about the most exciting part of our bakery. Here at the Wonka Factory, we use a rare and patented form of dough that expands much more than the usual fare. This allows us to produce some of the greatest baked goods ever seen!"

The girls gasped, impressed, but Shawna wasn't in a mood to appreciate his words. Something was wrong with her... she felt uncomfortably tingly all over. And so hot...

"Of course," Wonka continued thoughtfully, "the dough is also very unstable. That's why we ensure no one consumes it until it's completely risen. Otherwise, the side-effects would be-"

"Oh my god," another girl interrupted, "look at Shawna! Something's wrong with her!" Every head turned as one to regard the rebellious woman, who was clutching her stomach and groaning. "What's wrong with her?" another lady asked. "Look at her skin! It's all weird... she looks like she's made of dough!"

"Oh dear," Wonka muttered to himself. "And the tour was going SO well, too."

Shawna could only rub her tingling skin as she looked around the room in distress. Was it true? Was she turning into a dough girl?

"N-no," she murmured weakly. "I'm not a dough girl... I'm... it's just... really HOT in here." She wiped at her forehead, feeling in dismay how heavy her arm felt against her head... how soft...

"Oh god," LIzzy said. "What's happening to her now?"

In front of the girls' terrified eyes, the little dough girl was suddenly not looking quite so little. Her body began to plump and swell in all directions.

"It appears," Wonka replied, "that our dough girl is reacting to the heat of the ovens, and beginning to swell into the perfect pastry..."

"W-what... no..." Shawna cried feebly, running a hand along her expanding breasts, her ballooning butt. Pale doughy skin began to press outward from tears in her clothes. She whimpered as her face softened into a pastry pout. This was all wrong... her body... so fluffy and warm... so sensitive to the touch...

The girls all watched the dough girl continue to rise and expand in awe. "Wow, Wonka," a girl murmured. "You weren't kidding. That Wonka dough is potent stuff."

Shawna wasn't listening as she absently ran fattening digits along her ever-expanding body. Everything seemed so far away now, her thoughts increasingly... fluffy... as everything was getting lighter. She was so big. So tender. Truly growing into the perfect pastry. In the distance, she heard the faint chanting of approaching figures. It sounded like they were singing.

"Oompa, Loompa, doompety doo...."


Story by b-ridge
Artwork by r2roh

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